That wasn't very good, man.
I wouldn't make a movie off something that you wrote in the 1st grade. We have mature people on this site, and we don't get entertained by little kiddie stuff. I protected your movie, but I wouldn't be surprised if it got blammed. You had good enough animation on the sun and fade effects, but you need to give it a lot more than occassional motion. My eyes wandered after waiting 10 seconds for the next part of the scene. Make a live action movie or at least give it a good plot.